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Title: What's in a Frame?(Part 1)
'Verse: G1 Transformers
Characters: Ratchet. Optimus. Prowl.
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: TF cussing.
Notes: Bunny #2 from here.




Ratchet worked silently, a situation which would have freaked out many of the Autobots if they weren’t in the midst of fighting a pitched battle. As it was, the medic had no time or processing power to swear and curse as he fought a battle of his own under the cover provided by his Prime, sealing energon leaks before the bot under his hands bled to death. It was only after he’d cleared the twisted remains of what had once been the mech’s back armour that he stopped, processors stalling at the data his optics presented him.

“Ratchet! Megatron’s going for Op-”

He spotted the gunmetal Decepticon at the same time as the warning was yelled and stopped listening to lunge forward, too late to shield his commander from the attack. But his patient was faster. Ratchet’s optics stared at the ruined back that faced him and Prime, CPU struggling to comprehend how this mech was online, much less standing. His protector staggered back a step, then straightened.

“Well, what a surprise. The mighty Megatron isn't so mighty after all.”

“Shut up Starscream! I hit him at point blank range. There must be some other factor at work here if he hasn’t offlined!”

“I bet you tell that to all the bots, oh great and powerful leader! Your weapon rivals a wet noodle in effectiveness! It didn’t do slag to him!”

A missile slammed into Starscream’s wing before Megatron could respond. A second streaked past the gunformer, missing him by a laser’s breadth as Skywarp appeared to yank the Decepticon Commander to one side. A hail of acid pellets followed, prompting the teleporter to dart away with a yelp as he was targeted with the vindictiveness of a thwarted foe.

“Yes it did. It made him mad!”

A hush fell over their immediate surroundings as all took in the sight of Prowl, core systems practically hanging out of his chassis, driving the Decepticons away from him and Ratchet. A sharp comment over comms had the rest of the Autobots snapping back to the fight, eventually driving their enemies back.

“Prowl.”

“I’ll explain later.” The black and white mech managed before he stumbled, caught by Ratchet just in time for the medic to see his optics flicker and go dark with unconsciousness. The ambulance grumbled, hefting the doorwinged mech against his shoulder, waiting for Skyfire to get his aft over so they could return to the Ark.

“You’d better.”

= = =

Having seen off all but the injured still recovering in his med bay, the medic was waiting when Prowl finally woke. Arms crossed and expression suitably intimidating, he glowered at the black and white mech slowly sitting up and examining the damage done to him. Beside the CMO, the Prime rested on another berth, shifting uneasily. Ratchet understood the Autobot leader’s queasy expression. Prowl’s chest looked like someone had taken an ice cream scoop to it, carving a large hollow out of the mech’s torso. Most mechs with that kind of damage wouldn’t be able to come online.

Most mechs with that kind of damage would normally be dead.

But here was their SIC, looking for all the world like he’d just taken a few dents to his plating instead of having a goodly portion of his critical systems charred to so much ash. Ratchet had not dared to do more than seal off energon and coolant lines for fear of stopping whatever it was that was keeping Prowl alive. Even the damaged and half melted circuitry was still in place.

“Well, you said you’d explain. Explain.”

“There is a reason I do not often go into battle.” A white hand was exploring the empty space where once a familiar bumper and Datsun hood had been, making Optimus wince some more. Ratchet huffed.

“Yes, because you are slag at hand to hand.”

“I have mastered Diffusion and have taken several levels in Metallikato. I had begun my studies in Circuit Su before I had to cease such activities to focus on tactics instead. I assure you, Ratchet, my reasons for avoiding the battlefield are not because of any lack of combat ability.”

The medic read the many slights and disparaging remarks that had gone into building the tactician’s unusually defensive tone and sighed, switching tacks.

“Because we need a working CPU directing the madness, since Prime here can’t see out the back of his head. That’s where you come in. Only this time we needed every mech out on the field. Now, how the frag are you online and talking?”

“I took on several modifications and extra armour early in the war to hide my true appearance. The systems that run the additions are fully functional in order to avoid detection by any bot with even rudimentary medical knowledge. When they are damaged enough to fail or be knocked offline, my original systems take over.”

Ratchet blinked. Then groaned.

“And of course, this wouldn’t be in your medical file. So that’s why you never want to stay in the med bay.” The white and red mech vented air irritably and grabbed his tools.

“Fine. Tell me what I can get rid of.”

= = =

“Prowl?”

“Yes Prime?”

“I realise that it’s not my place to pry, but why did you choose to modify yourself so drastically?”

The mech shrugged, keeping his gaze fixed on the medic muttering under his breath and poring over the parts laid out on a worktable. Wires and cables snaked out from the tactician’s frame, connecting him to a monitoring device. Ratchet was taking no chances with Prowl, no matter how much the SIC reassured him that his original systems were fine.

“This form was more practical than the one I was sparked with. What I lost in terms of agility and speed was made up for by the addition to my defensive capabilities.”

“Practical or not, it was putting additional stress on your spark.” Ratchet scowled as he came over to check on the tactician’s readouts.

“An acceptable sacrifice, especially with the escalation in hostilities with the Decepticons and my position as SIC.”

“Slaggit Prowl! There’s a reason no one changes their root mode!”

“What reason is that Ratchet?” Optimus queried, sounding concerned, and the medic cycled air wearily, trying to keep his temper under control.

“Prowl can’t power a frame of this size. We’re lucky we found out before our glitch of a head tactician suffered from spark failure, with no chance of revival.”

Prowl opened his mouth, about to argue that he’d survived this long and would continue just fine in the same manner when Ratchet continued, optics hard. “And I’ll bet that his crashes from low energy levels were due to this, not that slag about ‘forgetting to refuel’ he’s got everyone believing. And those crashes have been increasing recently, haven’t they, Prowl?”

Optimus looked horrified, and with a sinking feeling, Prowl accepted that he would be returning to his original format for the rest of his natural lifespan.


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Date: 2010-04-02 08:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wicked3659.livejournal.com
ooohh I am very intrigued as to his true form

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Date: 2010-04-02 04:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ante-luce.livejournal.com
That should be in the next chapter, if the bunny doesn't make me draw it out ^_^;;

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Date: 2010-04-02 08:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anontfwriter.livejournal.com
Awesome. A great idea. Can't wait for the next part.

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Date: 2010-04-02 04:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ante-luce.livejournal.com
Thank you ^_^

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Date: 2010-04-02 08:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thalanee.livejournal.com
I can´t wait to see whot his original frame looks like...
I bet Jazz will chew him out once he finds out about this!

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Date: 2010-04-02 04:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ante-luce.livejournal.com
Next chapter is in the works ^_^

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Date: 2010-04-02 09:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flamekaat.livejournal.com
ooooh intriguing...now before I find something else to the awesome side I need to go to bed!

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Date: 2010-04-02 04:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ante-luce.livejournal.com
Thank you :3

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Date: 2010-04-02 09:49 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] lady_katana4544
Very intriguing. Wonder what will happen next.

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Date: 2010-04-02 04:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ante-luce.livejournal.com
Glad you like. I'm working on more ^_^

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Date: 2010-04-02 09:53 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] katsuko
Oooh, I think I already know what Prowl's natural frame looks like... I've been by the bunny farm recently and nearly got attacked by that one myself. I suppose I moved too quick for it XD

Looking fantastic thus far, and I can't wait for more!

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Date: 2010-04-02 04:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ante-luce.livejournal.com
Heh, only seeker bunnies are fast enough to get you? I have to improve my agility, the bitey bunny dance is getting ridiculously difficult.

Glad you like ^_^

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Date: 2010-04-02 11:01 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bookworm-faith.livejournal.com
On the one hand, PROWL DID WHAT D=
On the other...well, I always did enjoy a Ratchet yelling session! Looking forward to more!

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Date: 2010-04-02 04:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ante-luce.livejournal.com
Prowl has a little judgement issue when it comes to the good of the Autobots vs himself. Ratchet and Optimus are trying to fix it, one yelling at/stricken look at a time respectively.

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Date: 2010-04-02 01:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bookscrazygirl.livejournal.com
Oooh, now I'm curious about his original frame (as is every reviewer and reader.)

Don't leave us hanging! (Sharpens pitchfork) Or else... (dangles caffinated bunny food)

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Date: 2010-04-02 04:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ante-luce.livejournal.com
No fear, bunny is firmly planted in headspace and does not look keen to wander off any time soon.

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Date: 2010-04-02 01:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cave-cat.livejournal.com
Mwhahahah! I've been waiting for you to get this bunny out. >:3

I can't wait to see how you make the bunny jump through hoops and do other dare-devil stunts that will leave us readers hanging on for more. *sets up camp*

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Date: 2010-04-02 04:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ante-luce.livejournal.com
Eheh, more like the bunny is the one making me jump through hoops ^_^;; *offers s'more makings*

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Date: 2010-04-02 03:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sakon76.livejournal.com
Ohh, this is intriguing.

I admit to hoping that certain twins will be momentarily horrified, thinking that Ratchet finally went through with his threats and rebuilt someone. ^_^

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Date: 2010-04-02 04:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] synaltern.livejournal.com
The giggles that would induce! :D

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Date: 2010-04-02 04:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ante-luce.livejournal.com
Glad you like ^_^

*evil grin*

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Date: 2010-04-02 04:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] synaltern.livejournal.com
Your weapon rivals a wet noodle in effectiveness!

My poor coffee. Great stuff! (the coffee too)

And it might just be me, but this sentence seems to be missing a word:
And those crashes been increasing recently...
A 'have been', perhaps.

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Date: 2010-04-02 04:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ante-luce.livejournal.com
Oops, yes ^_^;; *fixy*

I can always count on Starscream for snarky insults :P
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Date: 2010-04-02 05:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ante-luce.livejournal.com
Thank you :) Reveal coming in the next chapter or so, bunny willing.

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Date: 2010-04-02 04:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ldot-rivian.livejournal.com
*cheers* Yes! Oh I love it! Everything you write is simply amazing.

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Date: 2010-04-02 05:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ante-luce.livejournal.com
*blush* Thanks ^_^

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Date: 2010-04-02 05:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] genre-savvy.livejournal.com
*bounces happily*

Awesome start!

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Date: 2010-04-02 05:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ante-luce.livejournal.com
*grin* Thank you, glad you like.

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Date: 2010-04-02 05:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] khamonai.livejournal.com
Awesome! *bounces* Prowl looking like a ghost to all on the battlefield, still standing with his "injuries" and kicking ass *snickers*
But now that he has to stay in his root mode again - it makes me curious what the rest of the bots will say - especially Jazz (sorry, couldn't help that one ^^)

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Date: 2010-04-02 05:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ante-luce.livejournal.com
Heh, I don't really know about that part yet. We'll see how the bunny bites, I guess? ^_^;;

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Date: 2010-04-02 06:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] burningxblue.livejournal.com
This is really good! I can't wait to see what the other bots' reactions are.

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Date: 2010-04-04 11:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ante-luce.livejournal.com
Thank you ^_^

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Date: 2010-04-02 10:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] insane-no-baka.livejournal.com
*waits in breathless anticipation* XP

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Date: 2010-04-04 11:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ante-luce.livejournal.com
0_0! *hauls out oxygen canister*

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Date: 2010-04-02 11:37 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] hecate-19.livejournal.com
Oh, now, this is... this is... I can't even articulate what an awesome job you did with this bunny.

Now I can't help but add a potential bun-let to this. What if Jazz was the same way, but had learned how to adapt to his new frame due to having it done before Prowl became SIC.

Yeah, I'm evil like that. *evil grin*

ReCaptcha says: inmates stickup

I guess "jail"(or potential med-bay prisoners)-birds of a feather stick together! :D

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Date: 2010-04-04 11:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ante-luce.livejournal.com
Since Prowl hadn't managed to adapt due to it actually being a physical issue rather than a programming one, I doubt Jazz would be able to either, no matter how adaptable our visored miscreant is ^_^;; Glad you like it though.

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Date: 2010-04-03 12:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] growlingturtlez.livejournal.com
Ooooh.... Interesting! I can't wait to see what his true root mode is...

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Date: 2010-04-04 11:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ante-luce.livejournal.com
Thank you :3

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Date: 2010-04-03 04:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluebirdsoaring.livejournal.com
Very interesting indeed! And here we thought only Jazz would do something crazy like that...but Prowl is truly crazy like a fox this way!! Perhaps Prowl was really a minibot? Who would have guessed it lol=)

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Date: 2010-04-04 11:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ante-luce.livejournal.com
Jazz has done something crazy like that, but that's another fic in another 'verse :P Glad you like.

Snickers

Date: 2010-04-03 07:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kholulu.livejournal.com
First post on LJ here. I saw this bunny awhile back on the farm and laughed, but I've got to say something about your take on it.

Pure genius. Especially with how you've incorporated Prowl's CPU crashes. I'm definitively looking forward to the crew's reaction :D

Re: Snickers

Date: 2010-04-04 11:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ante-luce.livejournal.com
Welcome to LJ, we don't bite (very hard). I can't guarantee anything about the bunnies though ^_^

I'm glad you like it.

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Date: 2010-04-04 12:09 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] crimsonseastorm.livejournal.com
You know when I saw the bunny I was like meh... didn't think it'd be a fic up my alley. Then you went and started it off like this and now of course I'm addicted *rolls eyes*

Excellent start ^___^

(Oh primus as if my muse isn't on crack as it is, now the captcha is trying to give me bunnies: abandoned corvette *rolls eyes and mutters*)

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Date: 2010-04-04 11:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ante-luce.livejournal.com
Oops? ;P Should I roll out a twelve step program?

Now I have mental images of chibi!Tracks sitting in a cardboard box with sad optics and a 'plz love me' sign. Aww...

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Date: 2010-04-04 03:16 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] crimsonseastorm.livejournal.com
Lol! Nah I'll just keep writing them down it satisfies the muse enough ^__^

And awwwwwwww poor Tracks! Such an adorable image though xD

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Date: 2010-07-26 08:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hakujitsumu9.livejournal.com
Oooh...I just followed the link from that bunny and its awesome!
...is there more yet?

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Date: 2010-07-27 02:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ante-luce.livejournal.com
There is more and this fic is complete, yes ^_^

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