ext_120214 ([identity profile] mmouse15.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ante_luce 2010-01-08 04:32 am (UTC)

I'm charmed by the entire story. Bluestreak is so cluelessly cute, and the way he manipulates both Prowl and Jazz had me LOL even as I was cooing at the cuteness.

I loved the 'out of the mouths of babes...' section. I can just imagine how stunned Prowl was, finding out that the mech he was attracted to was also attracted to him. Awesomely done, that bit.

And the ending was wonderful and fit in so smoothly with the rest of the story.

Once again, another lovely fic from you! Thank you for sharing it!

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