http://aradow.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] aradow.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ante_luce 2013-11-29 04:07 am (UTC)

Excellent writing! I know, I'm stumbling into this waaaaay late! But I love stories that depict Megatron as more than just a mindless destroyer. And I loved your use, or lack there of, of names through most of this. I think it really added something to the story. I was confused at first on the crushed sparkchamber portion at the end, but I"m guessing that's referring to Jazz's sparkchamber and thus Prowl used Megatron to spark Bluestreak? Interesting history to give all of these characters.

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