I just came across this story and wanted to say how much I enjoyed it. The drama of the whole Prowl/Jazz near-catastrophe on the Ark drew me in, and the resolution was interesting and believable. I love the way you captured the similarities and differences the different worlds, and I was fascinated by the way Sentinel's character evolved too. The diversion to the movie-verse was intriguing too - poor Jazz, no wonder he felt uneasy at the reactions he was getting. This ending was just lovely. After all Jazz's fears, TFA Prowl was ready and waiting. Oddly enough, for all the relative youth of the TFA bots, that Prowl somehow seems more confident, or just with fewer inhibitions and vorns of difficult experience to drag him down. And then that last scene was the perfect way to close the circle on this. All in all, a very enjoyable and satisfying read - thanks!
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Date: 2012-01-04 12:39 am (UTC)This ending was just lovely. After all Jazz's fears, TFA Prowl was ready and waiting. Oddly enough, for all the relative youth of the TFA bots, that Prowl somehow seems more confident, or just with fewer inhibitions and vorns of difficult experience to drag him down. And then that last scene was the perfect way to close the circle on this. All in all, a very enjoyable and satisfying read - thanks!