Hooray! I'm impressed, I really am, that you managed both the awkwardness of a dead Jazz and the hope that he won't stay that way. You've had your plot cake and eaten it too. I liked that they didn't end up at home right away; with the uncertainty of the process, it would have felt rushed if they'd just been blip, back home. Thanks for sharing this; marvelous to come back from vacation and see all these lovely chapters.
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Date: 2009-04-21 06:05 pm (UTC)