“No matter what anyone else thinks, I earned my rank in my dimension fair and square. I’d not have survived this long by being both loud-mouthed and a complete idiot."
Yeah and a bunch of luck. But I like how you are showing Sentinel does have some smarts, even if they are buried 98% of the time.
Prowls door wings are sensitive apparently.
The pace of your story here continues to be good. Not rushed, covering the details even, but not dragging everything out.
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Date: 2009-04-09 06:46 pm (UTC)Yeah and a bunch of luck. But I like how you are showing Sentinel does have some smarts, even if they are buried 98% of the time.
Prowls door wings are sensitive apparently.
The pace of your story here continues to be good. Not rushed, covering the details even, but not dragging everything out.
Thank you for sharing.