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Date: 2009-04-07 06:49 pm (UTC)
*wibble* Wondered how that confrontation was going to go. Ball's in your court now, Mr. G1 Jazz.

Can I grammar-pick again? A new person speaking should equal a new paragraph, every time. You have a tendency to switch speakers within the same paragraph.

Do we get to see Prowl and Sentinel's little conversation too? XD
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