ext_225724 ([identity profile] cmdrtekk.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ante_luce 2009-02-03 03:40 am (UTC)

Great little chapter here.

So based on the descriptions offered:

"just constantly shifting planes of light and shadow and form" = how a black and white paint job might translate to truly tanked mech

and

"an image that was sometimes doubled" = two bots not one

Plus all the hints that Prowl and Jazz are not surprised at all by Sideswipe's ability to care/look after/protect the seekerling - - - Leads me to believe that Jazz and Prowl were Sideswipe's conversation companions the night of his binge.

So after all that (and I'm hoping you followed all that); if I am correct and Prowl and Jazz are the answer, I think the way you delivered the information was indeed clever and well done.

Very artistic description of Sideswipe's perception if his drunken experience.

Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to more of this one.

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