ext_120214 ([identity profile] mmouse15.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ante_luce 2008-12-29 03:32 pm (UTC)

I had hoped someone would pick up that particular bunny, and the fact that it's you makes me squee in joy!

I love how the regret 'Prowl' feels comes through so clearly - his words seem weighed with despair, and Jazz figures so much out so quickly and that seems perfectly IC.

The ending scene made me want to lock them in a room together, but it was very well done.

Thanks for picking up the bunny and so wonderfully. It was a pleasure to read this.

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